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My last lovesong by ~Hent-Panthea:iconHent-Panthea:

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You used to be my inspiration,
you used to be the light of my imagination.
You used to be in every song:
in every word, in every note...
...until I realized that you didn't want to listen.

I sang and played loud my happiness,
wanting you to be as happy as I was,
but it's only been a mistake.
Maybe something scared you,
maybe my music was too heavy for you.
I don't really know...

I don't really know if you've ever liked it,
if you've ever tried to sing with me,
if you've ever appreciated all those warm notes.

I probably sang to the wind,
sang for something silly,
sang for someone who doesn't exist.

But don't worry.
Take this: it's my last lovesong for you,
my song of goodbye.
Then you won't hear me again.
I won't be a stupid anymore:
if you really love me, you'll be the next to sing and play.

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I really don't know how it came out.. No no, I know, I perfectly know. I'm a bit confused and not in the right mood.
I wrote something that in may sound stupid with simple words, I know, but that's how it came out at the moment... I just think this is the best thing to do to say what you're really feeling.
Yep, and I really feel a stupid right now.

Texture from: Sxc.

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~WaKa-LaKa Aug 4, 2007, 6:20:49 AM
beautiful :D

--
"Tragedy is when i cut my finger. comedy is when you fall into an open sewer and die." - Mel Brooks
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~Hent-Panthea Aug 4, 2007, 6:40:31 AM
Thank you very much! :D

--
I am a member of *thegoldenratio.

"First they ignore you,
then laugh at you and hate you,
then they fight you,
then you win."
Tripping - Robbie Williams
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~WaKa-LaKa Aug 4, 2007, 6:57:17 AM
your welcome :D

--
"Tragedy is when i cut my finger. comedy is when you fall into an open sewer and die." - Mel Brooks
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~ronnietheoutlawtorn Aug 4, 2007, 8:49:54 PM
Well, the concept and the pictoral portrayal of the concept is wonderful. The one thing that I don't like (in terms of aestetics), is the texture. That kind of texture is usually associated with photographs that cover a large amount of space, whereas yours is limited.

Nicely done. :clap:
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~Hent-Panthea Aug 4, 2007, 11:59:48 PM
Thank you very much. :) I appreciate what you said about the texture. Yep, it covers a lot the image, but I wanted to give it "an old and sad" style.. Well, I'll try to do better, thank you again! ;)

--
I am a member of *thegoldenratio.

"First they ignore you,
then laugh at you and hate you,
then they fight you,
then you win."
Tripping - Robbie Williams
:iconronnietheoutlawtorn:
~ronnietheoutlawtorn Aug 5, 2007, 3:00:02 PM
It's ok, the picture still looks great! :)
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